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Monday, February 3, 2014

Blending My Words



I sometimes make sweet and sour meatballs. Three of the ingredients, pineapple juice, BBQ sauce, and cranberry sauce, require mixing to achieve the right consistency. If I don't mash the jellied cranberry sauce into small enough chunks, it won't merge with the other flavors.

As I work on my book, I blend words together. Does this sentence stir my heart or intrigue my mind? If I add a bit more dialogue, will it improve the flow of the story? Is there enough setting detail to ground the reader or so much that it stops the action?

I allow the plot to simmer. My heart and mind travel down different paths to see where they will lead. This direction will add tension, while another resolves a problem. I return to season my tale with the fresh insights I've gained.

Writers: What are some of the ways you "cook" your stories?

Readers: What makes a book go from good to awesome for you?


Photo Credit: Duchessa


5 comments:

  1. Some columns and posts flow quickly and spring up spontaneously. Others simmer for a long time, like stew.

    Odd, how it works. But I'm glad it does. :)

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  2. I like this analogy! And now I am hungry...:)

    Happy blending and writing,
    Karen

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  3. Hi Rhonda - Different foods require different cooking times. So it is with stories. :)

    Hi Karen - Yes, I'd better go make dinner.

    Blessings,
    Susan :)

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  4. I have to think about that one Susan, I like the analogy you use... kind of like sweet-n-sour writing :)

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  5. What a great analogy, Suze!

    As a writer, I love using snappy dialog to add fun to my stories.

    As a reader, I love action that moves the story along. Too much narrative or description makes me yawn.

    Please share your recipe--it sounds great!

    Love, Jen

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