tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2252285009517721143.post8740266018445728964..comments2023-06-18T06:35:42.729-04:00Comments on Christian Writer/Reader Connection: Newbie Corner - What Is Head-Hopping?Susan J. Reinhardthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07461276857852409546noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2252285009517721143.post-70809930811110326732016-02-18T14:04:28.565-05:002016-02-18T14:04:28.565-05:00Excellent example. Short and sweet and right to th...Excellent example. Short and sweet and right to the point. Simple is the best way to learn. Joylene Nowell Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04497637513532136615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2252285009517721143.post-1644135417124444752016-02-18T10:16:44.786-05:002016-02-18T10:16:44.786-05:00I like this term-head hoppers! I do get disturbed ...I like this term-head hoppers! I do get disturbed when this happens in the stories I read, and have seen this even in best sellers. And thank you for the example on how to fix this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2252285009517721143.post-65503342484747847902016-02-07T19:21:03.319-05:002016-02-07T19:21:03.319-05:00Hi Karen,
Thanks. I'm glad you stuck with my ...Hi Karen,<br /><br />Thanks. I'm glad you stuck with my multiple POV novels. :)<br /><br />Hi Quiet Spirit,<br /><br />You're welcome. I'm glad the post was helpful.<br /><br />God bless,<br />Susan Susan J. Reinhardthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07461276857852409546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2252285009517721143.post-20557229192510564092016-02-01T20:41:17.932-05:002016-02-01T20:41:17.932-05:00It does cause me to have to re-read a passage. But...It does cause me to have to re-read a passage. But, when I was attending a writing group, one of the women used the phrase but never really explained it to us. Thank you for the explanation and the example.quietspirithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086016141181470311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2252285009517721143.post-6653117329695641192016-02-01T16:48:21.699-05:002016-02-01T16:48:21.699-05:00Good illustration, Susan. You know how much I disl...Good illustration, Susan. You know how much I dislike it when it's hard to follow characters, or when there's so many it's hard to keep up. It takes some of the enjoyment out of reading. :) Karen Langehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18177923284595298347noreply@blogger.com